Hello I've created the first version of the ReleaseNotes page for CentOS 6.0 in the wiki. As usual, corrections / additions / translations are welcome. Manuel
On 6/18/11, Manuel Wolfshant <wolfy at nobugconsulting.ro> wrote:> Hello > > I've created the first version of the ReleaseNotes page for CentOS > 6.0 in the wiki. As usual, corrections / additions / translations are > welcome. >Hi; I just glanced at this after breakfast, and I spotted a few grammatical errors you might wish to change: Section 2: "upstream vendors redistribution policy" should probably be "upstream vendor's redistribution policy." (In fact, I notice this is on the 5.6 release notes page as well.) Section 6.3: "Even as an inexperienced CentOS user we can use your help" sounds a bit like the release team is comprised of inexperienced CentOS users. It is, of course, not! Perhaps something like "Even as an inexperienced CentOS user, you can help the CentOS project!" would work better? This line made me pause as well: "Because we like to know what problems you encountered, if you had problems finding specific information, how you would improve documentation so it becomes more accessible." At the least, it should have a question mark at the end, although it is an awkward question. How does one improve documentation? The average user probably will not know. It might be better to include some specific advice here: get in touch with the dev team, contribute your own documentation, etc. Just my $0.02. Cheers, Cody Jackson
Ricardo David Carrillo Sanchez
2011-Jun-22 15:33 UTC
[CentOS-docs] initial page for 6.0 RN
Hi, Could you send the link to see the Release Notes ..? or wiki section Thank's Saludos -- Ricardo David Carrillo S?nchez Administrador de Sistemas Analista de Seguridad Inform?tica PGP/GPG key fingerprint: 7AD4 6D7B A09B C010 8445 31F4 92C2 DDFA 2DA0 E376 PGP/GPG public key: https://insecure-it.com.mx/keys/dominus.ceo.asc On Sat, Jun 18, 2011 at 1:19 PM, Manuel Wolfshant <wolfy at nobugconsulting.ro>wrote:> Hello > > I've created the first version of the ReleaseNotes page for CentOS > 6.0 in the wiki. As usual, corrections / additions / translations are > welcome. > > > Manuel > _______________________________________________ > CentOS-docs mailing list > CentOS-docs at centos.org > http://lists.centos.org/mailman/listinfo/centos-docs >-------------- next part -------------- An HTML attachment was scrubbed... URL: <http://lists.centos.org/pipermail/centos-docs/attachments/20110622/b59d05cd/attachment-0003.html>
On Wed, Jun 22, 2011 at 8:33 AM, Ricardo David Carrillo Sanchez <dominus.ceo at gmail.com> wrote:> > Hi, > Could you send the link to see the Release Notes ..? or wiki sectionHere: http://wiki.centos.org/Manuals/ReleaseNotes/CentOS6.0
On 18.6.2011 20:19, Manuel Wolfshant wrote:> Hello > > I've created the first version of the ReleaseNotes page for CentOS > 6.0 in the wiki. As usual, corrections / additions / translations are > welcome.I found one minor issue In section 2. Introduction Welcome to the CentOS 6.0 release. CentOS is an Enterprise-class Linux Distribution derived from sources freely provided to the public by our Upstream OS Provider (UOP)[1]. The footnote [1] is missing. -- Kind Regards, Markus Falb -------------- next part -------------- A non-text attachment was scrubbed... Name: signature.asc Type: application/pgp-signature Size: 307 bytes Desc: OpenPGP digital signature URL: <http://lists.centos.org/pipermail/centos-docs/attachments/20110623/89d21049/attachment-0001.sig>
On 06/23/2011 07:28 PM, Markus Falb wrote:> On 18.6.2011 20:19, Manuel Wolfshant wrote: >> Hello >> >> I've created the first version of the ReleaseNotes page for CentOS >> 6.0 in the wiki. As usual, corrections / additions / translations are >> welcome. > I found one minor issue > > In section 2. Introduction > > Welcome to the CentOS 6.0 release. CentOS is an Enterprise-class Linux > Distribution derived from sources freely provided to the public by our > Upstream OS Provider (UOP)[1]. > > The footnote [1] is missing.Hello thank you for notifying us. I fixed it Manuel